Wednesday, December 18, 2024

First Chapter Review & Giveaway: Scandalous in Huntington Beach by Melody DeBlois

 


I am reviewing this first chapter of the women's novel, Scandalous in Huntington Beach, by Melody DeBlois.  

BLURB: Politician and senate hopeful Bennett Browning knows nothing about babies. When his former girlfriend dies and leaves him with a daughter he knew nothing about, he’s left scrambling until he meets Emma Kuan, his daughter’s aunt, who volunteers to be the nanny. Emma is used to keeping secrets. She and her sister have always hidden their tragic past, but she’s stunned her sister hid the baby even from her. Meeting her niece captures her heart, and she would do anything to be with her, even living with a stranger. Worried about potential scandal, Bennett and Emma juggle jobs, living arrangements, and parenting until a doctor gives them bad news about their baby girl. Then their priorities change drastically.

COVER: Love this vibrant cover that shares the setting perfectly! The subtitle gives you a hint of what the book might entail, and the script writing is a nice touch. 


FIRST CHAPTER: Bennett Browning meets Emma Kuan at the funeral for his former girlfriend, Rachel, who is also Emma's half-sister. Having recently learned that he is the father of Rachel's daughter, Madelynn Grace, he has been awarded custody. Since he is totally clueless about babies, Emma offers to help him out until he hires a nanny, but it's clear from the beginning that they are attracted to each other.

KEEP READING: DeBlois drops the reader right into the thick of things with a tense meeting between Rachel's former lover and her half-sister, both of whom knew nothing about the baby. There is a hint of an attraction between them, but this opening chapter deals with the sadness of loss while introducing the hope of the future when Madelynn Grace is dropped off by the social worker. Definitely worth continuing with this story to learn more about all the main characters and see how far the author pushes them. 

EXCERPT: 

Bennett was having a hard time believing any of this was real. But it was, and his baby girl would depend on him for everything. He leaned against the chair and did what Emma told him. “Better?”

She nodded and handed over the wiggly Madelynn Grace. Bennett tried his hardest to hold on, afraid he’d drop her. With that in mind, he let Emma readjust his position with a nudge of his arms that had been too far apart and a lift of his right elbow to tilt her head a little. He intuitively lowered his face and sweet-talked the baby. In turn, she blew bubbles at him.

“I think she likes me.” He allowed her to poke him in the nose.

“Looks that way.”

His heart swelled. “I promise to give you the best life I can.”

When he glanced up, all smiles, he noted Emma’s quivering lower lip. Was she thinking of Rachel? Something in the hunch of her shoulders and lowered chin made him realize he knew so little about her.


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I received a digital copy of this book from the author through Goddess Fish Promotions. This First Chapter Review contains my honest opinions, which I have not been compensated for in any way.



16 comments:

Goddess Fish Promotions said...

Thank you so much for reviewing the first chapter of SCANDALOUS IN HUNTINGTON BEACH.

Michael Law said...

This looks like a book I will thoroughly enjoy. Thanks for sharing.

Cheryl Malandrinos said...

Thanks for having me on the tour.

Cheryl Malandrinos said...

Hope you get a chance to read it, Michael. Thanks for visiting.

Peggy Hyndman said...

What do you find to be the most challenging part of writing? And the most rewarding?

Melody DeBlois said...
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Melody DeBlois said...

That's a good question, Peggy. For me, the most challenging part of writing is facing that first blank page, pushing through, continuing until I get to the end, and writing many more drafts until the book shines. The most rewarding part is when a reader tells me how much they enjoyed the read.

Melody DeBlois said...

Thank you so much, Cheryl, for the beautiful review of my first chapter. I'm glad it caught your interest and appreciate your kind words.

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Cali W. said...

Great excerpt and giveaway. :)

Cheryl Malandrinos said...

Thanks for visiting, Cali. Hope you enjoy this one.

Cheryl Malandrinos said...

Thanks for visiting today, Peggy!

Melody DeBlois said...

Thank you for your praise, Cali!

Melody DeBlois said...

Thank you, Cheryl, having me on your website. It was fun!

Cheryl Malandrinos said...

Thanks for stopping by and interacting with the readers here, Melody. Wishing you the best.

Edgar Gerik said...

Great excerpt